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the night watchman Studio Exec
Joined: 27 Jun 2003 Posts: 1373 Location: Dark, run-down shack by the graveyard.
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Posted: 02.01.2004 6:06 pm Post subject: Stories by the night watchman. |
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The second story I received actual money for hit the Web today, inside the cyberpages of The Cafe Irreal. Below is a direct link to the story, but I strongly recommend checking out the rest of the issue (#11), as well the e-zine's archives; they putout some good stuff.
the story "Glove Box Heart"
http://home.sprynet.com/~awhit/cummings.htm
The Cafe Irreal homepage
http://home.sprynet.com/~awhit/index.htm
Here's a link to my first professional sale at ChiZine. This is a great e-zine, too, boasting a quality comparable to any print magazine I've read. (By the way, ChiZine only archives for so long, and the issue my story appeared in is next to go, so if you're interested, you might want to check it out soon.)
the story "Somewhere Else Besides North"
http://www.chizine.com/somewhere_else_besides_north.htm
(You'll also find a picture of the author in his natural habitat here.)
homepage for Chizine
http://chizine.com/
Enjoy!
[Michael - I wasn't sure if this should be posted here or in the Pimp Your Own Stuff forum. If you'd rather this thread be there, let me know, lock up this one, and I'll make a new one on Pimp. Thanx.] _________________ "If you're talking about censorship, and what things should be shown and what things shouldn't be shown, I've said that as an artist you have no social responsibility whatsoever."
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the night watchman Studio Exec
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Posted: 02.08.2004 10:57 pm Post subject: |
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No interest, or just no comments? _________________ "If you're talking about censorship, and what things should be shown and what things shouldn't be shown, I've said that as an artist you have no social responsibility whatsoever."
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beltmann Studio Exec
Joined: 26 Jun 2003 Posts: 2341 Location: West Bend, WI
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Posted: 02.09.2004 12:27 am Post subject: |
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LOTS of interest, but I'm planning to take a closer look yet. (In fact, I was just thinking about these links earlier today.)
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the night watchman Studio Exec
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Posted: 02.09.2004 12:44 am Post subject: |
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Coolio. Feedback good. _________________ "If you're talking about censorship, and what things should be shown and what things shouldn't be shown, I've said that as an artist you have no social responsibility whatsoever."
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Michael Scrutchin Studio President
Joined: 26 Jun 2003 Posts: 832 Location: Pearland, TX
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Posted: 02.09.2004 3:28 am Post subject: |
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I've been meaning to settle down and read the stories, but I haven't had time yet. Soon.
_________________ Michael Scrutchin
Flipside Movie Emporium
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the night watchman Studio Exec
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Posted: 02.09.2004 3:49 am Post subject: |
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There's an option for a printable version on the Chizine site, if that affords any convenience, so you're not stuck at your computer. _________________ "If you're talking about censorship, and what things should be shown and what things shouldn't be shown, I've said that as an artist you have no social responsibility whatsoever."
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The Third M?n Studio Exec
Joined: 09 Sep 2003 Posts: 575 Location: Chasing Stef around post-war Vienna
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Posted: 02.09.2004 8:44 pm Post subject: |
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I just read Glove Box Heart. Ambiguous, thrilling, sexy and very finely written [you have style!] -- the ending is great, too. It's wonderful to see how you can create such a relationship between a man and a woman in so little time. Kudos!
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the night watchman Studio Exec
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Posted: 02.09.2004 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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The Third M?n wrote: | [you have style!] |
And I obviously don't display any of it in my posts! I'm glad you liked it. I'm actually surprised how well this story often goes over with readers, considering it's anything besides traditional (which is what Cafe Irreal requires). Thanks for the feedback and enthusiasm, Mr. Lime! _________________ "If you're talking about censorship, and what things should be shown and what things shouldn't be shown, I've said that as an artist you have no social responsibility whatsoever."
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The Third M?n Studio Exec
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Posted: 02.10.2004 4:12 pm Post subject: |
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the night watchman wrote: | The Third M?n wrote: | [you have style!] |
And I obviously don't display any of it in my posts! I'm glad you liked it. I'm actually surprised how well this story often goes over with readers, considering it's anything besides traditional (which is what Cafe Irreal requires). Thanks for the feedback and enthusiasm, Mr. Lime! |
That's okay -- and your posts do have style, too! Sorry I didn't read the rest, but I had to study for a R.E. GCSE mock exam for this morning [did very well, actually!] I will proceed to read another one this evening. |
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The Third M?n Studio Exec
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Posted: 02.20.2004 1:09 pm Post subject: |
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Hey, Thomas, I just saw a picture of you -- I'd never imagined you'd look like that! But, nice seeing you. |
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the night watchman Studio Exec
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Posted: 02.20.2004 3:27 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, I'm damn sexy. _________________ "If you're talking about censorship, and what things should be shown and what things shouldn't be shown, I've said that as an artist you have no social responsibility whatsoever."
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The Third M?n Studio Exec
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Posted: 02.20.2004 3:28 pm Post subject: |
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I printed your second story. Comments will come soon, I promise! |
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the night watchman Studio Exec
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Posted: 02.20.2004 3:29 pm Post subject: |
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Cool, can't wait. _________________ "If you're talking about censorship, and what things should be shown and what things shouldn't be shown, I've said that as an artist you have no social responsibility whatsoever."
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The Third M?n Studio Exec
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Posted: 02.20.2004 3:59 pm Post subject: |
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Very lovely, Thomas. A thorough, very well written story with a rather nihilistic, mysterious tone to it. I know you're interested in urban stories and the paranormal [not unlike I] and this suits it just fine. I love stories about childhood fears [my story is also about that] and this one conveys those emotions with a rare -- yet ever-effective -- ability. I also liked how you don't fully explain what the shadows are -- I guess it's open to interpretation, right?
Anywho -- great story, man. |
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the night watchman Studio Exec
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Posted: 02.20.2004 4:10 pm Post subject: |
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I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I've found it's hard to scare the reader more than he can scare himself, so, yes, I left the shadows up for the reader. So, you've written a story about childhood fears? Why not post it? _________________ "If you're talking about censorship, and what things should be shown and what things shouldn't be shown, I've said that as an artist you have no social responsibility whatsoever."
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